偷声木兰花·又见梅红
偷声木兰花·又见梅红——次韵墨涵（立吉）樵夫
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暗香馥郁千千瓣，粉蝶翩跹绕柳岸。知己红颜，欲火难销伊甸魂。
追思难忘青衣影，闯荡江湖情面冷。缱绻怀春，望眼欲穿相爱真。
.偷声木兰花【定格】 (《康熙词谱》236页 双调，50字，前后段各4句，2仄韵,2平韵。 )中平中仄平平仄（韵），中仄平平平仄仄（韵）。中仄平平（韵）。中仄平平仄仄平（韵）。平平中仄平平仄（韵），中仄平平平仄仄（韵）。中仄平平（韵）。中仄平平仄仄平（韵）。.
附原玉：步韵碧涵妹《偷声木兰花·又见梅红》墨涵(立吉)
萧条孤蕊呈双瓣。馥郁芳心依曲岸。淡泊红尘。独守幽香寄画魂。
相依岁月烟波影。道远生涯风雨冷。喜迎新春。一世无忧存故真。
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——次韵墨涵（立吉）樵夫
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暗香馥郁千千瓣，粉蝶翩跹绕柳岸。知己红颜，欲火难销伊甸魂。
追思难忘青衣影，闯荡江湖情面冷。缱绻怀春，望眼欲穿相爱真。
.偷声木兰花【定格】 (《康熙词谱》236页 双调，50字，前后段各4句，2仄韵,2平韵。 )中平中仄平平仄（韵），中仄平平平仄仄（韵）。中仄平平（韵）。中仄平平仄仄平（韵）。平平中仄平平仄（韵），中仄平平平仄仄（韵）。中仄平平（韵）。中仄平平仄仄平（韵）。.
附原玉：步韵碧涵妹《偷声木兰花·又见梅红》墨涵(立吉)
萧条孤蕊呈双瓣。馥郁芳心依曲岸。淡泊红尘。独守幽香寄画魂。
相依岁月烟波影。道远生涯风雨冷。喜迎新春。一世无忧存故真。
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