深山樵翁 发表于 2023-2-3 05:31:53

殢人娇·冷月春梅

殢人娇·冷月春梅
——依韵和张国应先生
樵夫

水秀山清,玉蕊寒枝凝露。暗香飘、引来羁旅。遣排寂寞,对疏林哭诉。漫辗转、大事险些耽误。
    满树莺声,满腔愁绪。孤影泣、泪流如注。一泓浊水,惹烦忧而据。难入寐、携梦相思苦度。
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殢人娇(又名"咨逍遥"。)【定格】 (《康熙词谱》460页   双调,68字,前后段各6句、4仄韵。另有双调68字,前后段各7句、4仄韵等变体。)
中仄中平,中仄中平中仄。中中中、中中中仄。中平中仄,仄中平中仄。中仄仄、中中仄平中仄。
中仄中平,中平中仄。中中中、中平中仄。中平中仄,仄中平平仄。中中仄、中中中中中仄。
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附原玉:殢人娇·冷月秋蝉
张国应
月白风清,已是寒凝玉露。谁怜得、天涯孤旅。林泉寂寞,怎深情倾诉。还翼翼、偏叫此生耽误。
一地秋声,千堆意绪。怎能够、付将弦柱。蟾光如水,只相思无据。泠然也、梦底云桥堪度。

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