深山樵翁 发表于 2023-3-23 07:19:34

兰陵王·忘归岛

兰陵王·忘归岛——依韵和陈小鹏樵夫.百花苑,含露暗香淡淡。且欲滴,姹紫嫣红,最是晴天忒妖艳。绿叶彰动感,牵杜鹃歌舞演。丘陵处,幻影朦胧,宛若蓬莱景惊现。凭栏独巡看,翠林鸟欢鸣,人聚湖畔。烟岚缭绕尘弥漫。碧湖白浪翻,画舟激荡,柳浦穿行觅食雁,红霞蔚霄汉。湖岸,众鹅唤。野鹜共穿行,水碧波滟。引仙称羡金鸾殿。美颜翩跹舞,仙人企盼。粤腔湘韵,博得王母玉皇赞!    注:忘归岛位于南海侠客岛右下角,距大陆有四天的航程,在无人指引下很难到达其地。.兰陵王(又名“大犯”、“兰陵王慢”)【定格】(《康熙词谱》1139页    正体,三段,131字。前段10句,6仄韵;中段8句,5仄韵;后段9句,6仄韵。)仄平仄,平仄仄平仄仄。仄平仄,仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄平仄。仄仄平仄仄,平仄平平仄仄。平平仄,仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄平仄。平平仄平仄。仄平仄平平,平仄平仄。平平平仄平平仄。仄平仄仄平,仄平仄仄,仄仄平平仄仄仄。平平仄平仄。平仄。仄平仄。仄仄仄平平,仄仄平仄。仄平平仄平平仄。仄平平平仄,平平仄仄。仄平平仄,仄仄平仄仄平仄。.附原玉:忘归岛   文/ 陈小鹏径花含露羞红,暗香浮动淡淡。柔红且欲滴,风吹仍妖艳。莫笑寂寥,仰望回归群雁。独凭栏、青翠连河畔。绿叶太动感,仙雾缭绕弥漫。泛舟深处,蓬莱仙境惊现。
草际鸣蛩,引领入仙殿。美乐源自秦汉?娇颜舞素练。惊叹,惊叹!今夜谁想离岸?

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红安云 发表于 2023-3-23 21:24:31

粤腔湘韵,水远波长。
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