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喝火令·兔年早春

喝火令·兔年早春——依韵和发改钟先生樵夫.
浪涌轻舟荡,阳辉潋滟长。水涯柳岸着新装。晴日客流如帜,早起沐朝阳。晓看娆妖景,暮闻玉液香。一泓碧水接遐方。满载柔情,满载美娇娘。满载万家缱绻,期许众安康。.摊破句:晴日客流如帜,早起沐朝阳。满载柔美缱绻,期许众安康。.喝火令【定格】(《康熙词谱》431页双调,65字,前段5句,3平韵,后段7句,4平韵。 )仄仄平平仄,平平仄仄平(韵)。仄平平仄仄平平(韵)。中仄仄平平仄,中仄仄平平(韵)。仄仄平平仄,平平仄仄平(韵)。仄平平仄仄平平(韵)。仄仄平平,仄仄仄平平(韵)。仄仄仄平平仄,中仄仄平平(韵)。.附原玉:【喝火令】兔年早春(四/云改令)    文/发改钟兔日春风荡,人生岁月长。水边垂柳试新装。开放客游如织,多地会全阳。雾化绵绵雨,梅飘淡淡香。一帘幽梦起何方。故里情怀,故里续思量。故里万家灯火,些许复安康。
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